да нет, как ни странно - наоборот - первый мне на форуме "заказывали", а второй сам по себе, по наитию как-то получился... не знаю, сложнее или проще, но было интереснее.
кроме переводов - вот есть парочка огрызков, еще более старых и перезамороченных, на кривом английском. на остальное мне совсем стыдно было смотреть, и я все потерла )
a firebird came along and she looked nice she was told to pay the double price it won't fit into corridors and shone too bright something could catch a fire they thought it might
so she stretched her wings and rose above the crowd, so they all closed their eyes as she headed to the sun and their light now looked like one
they said she maybe burned away proceeded further through the rain and all except for two or three forgot that some time they were free
--
fix that hole inside your head don't be worried you're not dead there are simple dreams and charming voices but they never should affect your unique choices watch the special ones for inspiration; be sincere, calm your mind as you can; feelings will themselves appear. and keep away from past affections they slowly lead you old directions when soul is uncertain - who for real can differ an aspiration from a memory?
all you see and all you know should be left all down below on the edge of vision; stay aware only for that you specially care. the intentions let remain that you see are not in vain. if there's no progress at first don't be quick to think the worse. ask yourself a thousand times is it worth a thousand tries? if there's meaning - but there's bore in something you've never seen before then try to keep it for a day that one of them will pass away.
care for those who never meant to seem unintelligent but they are; and never more then to show them proper door there are millions of them so help them gently there below but keep your time; what stays there higher lacks attention and enquire. disillusions never should chase you off the ways you would choose to reveal; all stupid case was illusion in wrong place.
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Date: 2010-07-25 12:25 am (UTC)а второй сам по себе, по наитию как-то получился... не знаю, сложнее или проще, но было интереснее.
кроме переводов - вот есть парочка огрызков, еще более старых и перезамороченных, на кривом английском.
на остальное мне совсем стыдно было смотреть, и я все потерла )
a firebird came along and she looked nice
she was told to pay the double price
it won't fit into corridors and shone too bright
something could catch a fire they thought it might
so she stretched her wings and rose
above the crowd, so they all closed
their eyes as she headed to the sun
and their light now looked like one
they said she maybe burned away
proceeded further through the rain
and all except for two or three
forgot that some time they were free
--
fix that hole inside your head
don't be worried you're not dead
there are simple dreams and charming voices
but they never should affect your unique choices
watch the special ones for inspiration; be sincere,
calm your mind as you can; feelings will themselves appear.
and keep away from past affections
they slowly lead you old directions
when soul is uncertain - who for real
can differ an aspiration from a memory?
all you see and all you know
should be left all down below
on the edge of vision; stay aware
only for that you specially care.
the intentions let remain
that you see are not in vain.
if there's no progress at first
don't be quick to think the worse.
ask yourself a thousand times
is it worth a thousand tries?
if there's meaning - but there's bore
in something you've never seen before
then try to keep it for a day
that one of them will pass away.
care for those who never meant
to seem unintelligent
but they are; and never more
then to show them proper door
there are millions of them so
help them gently there below
but keep your time; what stays there higher
lacks attention and enquire.
disillusions never should
chase you off the ways you would
choose to reveal; all stupid case
was illusion in wrong place.